Carlymillie

Yes. I think I do. I'll get back to you say before he day runs out...but it will be pretty late.. (Theatre arts student, got a whole lot of rehearsal ...

yeah you got it B! And a happy Thanksgiving too.

Thanks so much!! it's a 2 stanza poem, but I wasn't the one who posted, I sent to a friend to do it for me.. But he didn't divide it. ...

Awww, thanks!! And yeah the no punctuation thing was on purpose. All the same I'm glad you liked it!

Carly here; Nice, relatable work here...I like the passion filled in this poem... By threw did u mean through? was it intentional? this is just a comment anyway.

Anytime

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Carly's Corner: First off, I'd like to officially say welcome to YWS, I've never really said that to you. And I'd appreciate the fat that you tried to punish something ...

yes!! very much!!

Carly here; I must say, I love this poem. and @DemonGoddes , you've been reviewing so much lately!

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Carly's here: This isn't exactly a review to the poem but more of an analysis. The poem is quite vague, but I made out a thing or two from it, ...

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Carly's here: This isn't exactly a review to the poem but more of an analysis. The poem is quite vague, but I made out a thing or two from it, ...

thanks you -(welcome to YWS). I'll try and work on the punctuations and every other detail you stated..Thank you!..I appreciate.

Thanks so much, I actually didn't write this as a poem or something, I just wrote because I was bored. but I needed to post something on here, since I'm ...

If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be smiling right now. This is so beautiful, the flow your peom, is so natural. your rhyming is not forced, it's natural. your ...

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Your work is nice, but sincerely it was blank and I think too cliché. It seemed like it was headed somewhere for a minute or two, but it lost direction ...