CardDragon

I think this explained some feelings about fear. It gave some brief examples and I believe it could benefit from a personal example of how you encountered fear. I think ...

Hmm. I my personal opinion, I don't believe there is a definition for being a lady other than being classy and sophisticated. But in the world today, lady is just ...

Well first of all. I like the fact that it had the message that the world has become a bad place where people are used to having pollution and basically ...

I feel as if this poem could be the intro to some amazing show where they have legendary armor and what not, but I thought this poem was surely and ...

This is an interesting piece, it is short but describes a scene, essential to a world where a girl is bullied at school, but doesn't have enough money to go ...

Hmm. This started as the typical school teenage set up. Rya full of anger was helped by her friends by playing confidante. Rya gave a lot of gifts to the ...

Hmm. This story could be better. I mean, it switches from first person to 3rd person manner really quick at the beginning. I think you are confusing the 1st person ...

This seems like a real book, I would read in a book store. I consider you think about you getting this story published. Though, it has some missing elements. Cain ...

This was an okay story. I will say not much happened in the story. Basically it delivers a vague scene of her moving to a rural town and then laying ...

So, I also do comics. I like your style of art but it could be done a bit better. Better proportions and characters positioned a bit better. I mean I ...

This poem has a nice turn of events. I actually sung it when I wad reading it. It has a nice tune to it and reminds me of something I ...

Well, I think its good that you can write even after you've finished a work shift. And well to tell you the truth, the descriptions of the circumstances in the ...

I'd say, its interesting from the description you gave. Kasza's appearance could use some more explaining or rather more description. Either something like "Kasza was a normal boy except" or ...

I am thinking that you are referring to a sexual component of the female frame. Because to me, the title seems like it referring to light coming from something wet. ...

I think this a good representation of the X-Men series and one of their possible story lines. Though, I still think this story could do with a bit more imagery ...