CamorynAnn

I agree completely, but, i have recently become aware of the vast amount of yws' younger members, and I sometimes feel bad and get worried that they will see my ...

I actually rarely do write poems that rhyme, more often then not they are in free verse. I challenge myself occasionally to rhyme, and those are often the ones that ...

thank you for the review, I had not tried stanzas with this, i rarely use them. I will consider it for the future though. Also, I am glad you saw ...

i believe it's meant to be the vowels/"y" from "I hate you", yes?

If I write, it is because that's how I feel. I write to let it all out. So, yes, I do feel this way. I tried an ABAB with this ...

thats alright aha

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thank you so much for the review, I am so glad that I can see someone understanding this piece so well!!!!

i used space to continue the rhyme with face. and i dont really understand what youre saying about the structure?

i actually meant it to have a double meaning, as in "the last hope arose" and "the last hope, a rose"

I have this poem written with a rose I drew hanging on the wall, I guess I didn't even think about changing it on this. thank you for the review ...

hmm yes I do think that would sound better. then it would not have as much of the less interesting part... That would actually make this a lot better. I ...

hmm, funny wasn't my goal... but thank you for the review, I will watch for that about the sentence structure in the future :)

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hey there. thanks for the review! honestly about 2 out of the ten poems i write ever rhyme. I did have great difficulty in getting this one to but alas ...