Cameron

The change is that of a changed attitute--Sawyer's decision to act on his emotions. I don't know if you've realized yet, but Sawyer is not right in the head; his ...

That would probably be a better way of describing her wouldn't it. Thanks, for the suggestion, I'll get started on that. :) Cheers, Cameron

You have to be careful when you write romance novels that you don't settle into an overused cliche. That's all I have to say.

After having reflected upon the content of this poem, I've come to the conclusion that I must provide the correct interpretation of this poem, in light of the controversial material. ...

I would remove "had" in: Was hidden as if it had died

There is a haunting starkness to this poem that is both elegant in its simplicity and captivating through the impact of the subject matter. Bravo.

Ahh Sharty you make me laugh. So does your work, keep it up. Cheers.

I don't usually enjoy rythming, but I think you pulled it off quite nicely.

What I wanted to convey with this poem is confusion and chaos (i.e. dyslexia)...therefore I wanted no particular sense or order at all (but I aimed to have it at ...

Thanks guys, I'm flattered.

I really enjoyed this. I don't know if Waffles did this purposefully...but I interpreted some religious references in the story…maybe it’s just me.

There still has to be some element of sense can be abstract sure...but even the most abstract poetry has some underlying element of structure. Anyone can just slap words onto ...

This has potential, but I find it a little too repetitive (half loves) and it looks almost like your throwing random words into your poems that don't really belong or ...

It was all over the place. It wasn't very pleasing to read. The ryhmes were forced (as Misty said). Overall, I think you concentrated too much on ryhming and not ...

Simple, not extraordinarily intellectually challenging...but enjoyable all the same.