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by Incandescence
  • September 25, 2006
  • Short Story
  • Romantic
  • Old Poetry
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deleted commented · Mon Sep 25, 2006 8:09 pm

Clumpy?

I want to fall in love again.

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Cameron
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Cameron commented · Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:51 pm

You have to be careful when you write romance novels that you don't settle into an overused cliche. That's all I have to say.

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Wiggy
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Wiggy wrote a review · Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:18 pm

It's awesome!!!! Like I've stated time and time again, I love your work Brad. :D

Wiggy ;)

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Kay Kay
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Kay Kay commented · Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:16 pm

I absolutely love it. The only thing i would change is more detail about the surroundings and what exactly they are doing. I think it was sweet.



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