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by Incandescence

Published September 25, 2006

In Old Poetry

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deleted commented Comment · Sep 25, 2006

Clumpy?

I want to fall in love again.

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Cameron
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Cameron commented Comment · Sep 25, 2006

You have to be careful when you write romance novels that you don't settle into an overused cliche. That's all I have to say.

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Wiggy
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Wiggy wrote a review Review · Sep 25, 2006

It's awesome!!!! Like I've stated time and time again, I love your work Brad. :D

Wiggy ;)

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Kay Kay
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Kay Kay commented Comment · Sep 25, 2006

I absolutely love it. The only thing i would change is more detail about the surroundings and what exactly they are doing. I think it was sweet.



Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)