That bloody cat!
Such a pest
Bouncing balls
Catnip toy
Rattling mouse
She bites my hands
And nips my nose
Won't let me work
I close the door
She just opens it
Talk about an impulse buy!
So innocent in the store
Gave me a kiss
Looked at me
With big brown eyes
Such innocent eyes
Not so innocent now
But I love her all the same
My beautiful cat
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you have the best kind of silliness.
i think it would be great for kids to read or something like that.
True, it's not. But since when is silliness supposed to be intentionally intellectual or challenging?
Simple, not extraordinarily intellectually challenging...but enjoyable all the same.
Awww this is very cute and sweet. I like it a lot. My cat dies a few months ago and this brought back some memories!
It's cute. Simple and sweet. I like I like!
Awwww. This is sweet. I have a cat named Porki who is exactly the same way, and I think it's adorable the way you've put this to writing. ^_~
Thanks, guys. It's nice to know that sometimes, I am capable of writing something people like.
When I started reading this poem, I totally thought you were dissing your cat, but I know exactly how it feels to own a cat that doesn't let you work (my muse is more or less the thing that prevents me from seeing the monitor), and I was going to strangle you for being so cruel to kitties. But the last two lines cleared that up, I'm happy to say.
Anyway, this is a very good piece; I understand exactly what you're talking about. Brief, to the point... I like it.
Cute! I like it. ^_^ Nothing else to say. Nothing was wronge except for "Rattlilng" which is just a typo. Good job!