Calligraphy

I really like the first part of this poem, but it seems to slowly dwindle off. Like your mind is wondering maybe. I highlighted in blue the lines I like ...

This was beautiful. It reminded me of an old couple still fiery with love. A couple that were high-school sweet hearts. Still innocent, even though they, at the end of ...

Because English isn't your first language my first review will to help you with that. All changes will be in bold. You also might want to use a program like ...

The first thing I want to say is that some of your rhymes seemed really forced. Stuff I added or changed will be in blue . I look around and ...

In a town, There is a steeple, Above a church filled with people, They sing a song to a god above, Thinking that it's Him they love. I would take ...

This is really good. It flowed really well, and Most of the rhymes didn't seem forced. I liked the concept too, though you did repeat some parts of it too ...

It starts out simple , A fairy or two , Some magical flowers , Spring , alive in front of you . Like I showed above punctuation would help, but ...

[i] Banana, ice cream and chocolate sauce; That’s all you need for a round of applause, Well, in your stomach of course! Sprinkles, more sauce; a couple’s delight, Take out ...

"Good night moon," he uttered as he closed the glass window of his room. A better way to phrase this is: he uttered as he closed his bedroom window. (we ...

I am here to review like you asked. Before I start I have to tell you if I repeat something someone else already said I am sorry, but I don't ...

This isn't really in poem format. If you change it I would be happy to review. :) A. S. P.S. I haven't seen you around so I just want to ...

First I would like to say that the name really intrigued me whatever you do keep that the same. I really loved the poem. It was very emotional. Only a ...

I am here to review like you asked, and I really wanted to read it anyway. red - the subject of all the other colors. Blue - General comments. pink ...

Well, I am here to review like you asked :) red - the subject of all the other colors. Blue - General comments. pink - grammar (taking away words, adding ...

I am here to review like you asked. First I must say that the title isn't very intriguing I would have never clicked on it unless you asked. Second I ...