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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Golden girl.

    There she go's The golden girl The one, my lover's holding She twists her hair , and lets him k no w she's got no better place to go. 'Go' ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Echo

    You know what is really funny about this poem? Even though it is so short it could be broken up into two stanzas. Actually now that I think about it, ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the linguist

    Hmmm... This poem has two major parts of it that are wholly unconnected with each other. One has to do with the learning of language and the other has to ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle

    This is so awesome. I thought it was going to be stupid. Boy was I wrong. I actually laughed out loud. :D I can't really find any mistakes so sorry ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel

    This book, this book frankly annoyed me. They are getting worse and worse. This is all drama. Fang was suposed to be action. But, it seems like the author didn't ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Dog and Me

    Hi Alzora here with another poem! Hope you like it! Alzora My Dog and Me I watch my dog from my porch, She stalks slowly through the grass. She stops ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Love Poem

    Do you think that the last stanza was a good hooker? O.K the last stanza was a hooker, but I was picturing high school sweet hearts. They did get older ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Listening to Guqin in Autumn

    This is really good! *likes The troughs lay barren , Unused hay stacked high . The horses have all gone home To sleep in the sky. Grey pastures they fled ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ...

    S he kneels in her garden as if in prayer Like it has been said change this to 'into' spine curved, knotted hands plunging in earth. T he rim of ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: What you want is not what you get (PART 1)

    O.K. I pretty much just agree with roal, but I thought if two people tell you the same thing you might believe it more. I already really like the idea, ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fresh Air

    O.K. I think some of this was lost in translation. Meaning I am pretty sure I only get part of this deeper meaning. Because I don't get it at the ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Heart Song

    I am not really good with grammar, but some of sentences in this sound way to long. I broke some of them up. I just will put in bold blue ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: This Love

    This is my love for razors and pain ~~~ for cutting away O.K. I really like this poem and the repetition is used well. It doesn't take anything away from ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Suggestions Needed!

    Oh my gosh oh my gosh! You are so awesome. You are the only person I have met that has liked the outsiders. I love you. *gives bear hug* I ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Books you loved more than the movie...

    Also, they're making Artemis Fowl into a movie, which I shall avoid like the plague. You'd think writers and directors would know when their books will make crap movies, but ...

    Oct 7, 2010


It’s not unorthodox, I thought it was beautiful.
— Jimi Hendrix