Calligraphy

The tiniest of nitpicks: Gunshot's are the most intriguing to watch. Seeing them scatter like tiny rodent fleeing a cat. Not sure why you have apostrophe S. This is very ...

Dear diary, I’m worrying really badly, I know I shouldn't, no actually I should. O.K. my OWLS are coming up and even though I’m home and I should be able ...

Hi, I am certainly no poet so I can only give you suggestions. This was really good and I saw imagery so you got what you were going for. A ...

O.K, so this is a good piece. Of course, like all works, (particularly mine) it can be improved. But, first I suggest putting the prologue and the other chapters you ...

First off this good piece of work, though a bit short. So, this isn't going to be a really long review, because this is basically a paragraph. Secondly, your grammar. ...

First off lets get grammar dealt with, Red = corrected spelling My eyes flittered up. I immediately realized that I was freezing cold. I sat up, not remembering how I ...

My least favorite book of all time was probably a tie between "Moccasin Trail" by Eloise Jarvis McGraw and "All Sail Set" by Armstrong Sperry. I have fortunately never read ...

Two nitpicks: “Your play, my puppet, is a tragedy. I admit it was poorly scripted and somethings things This didn't make sense to me. just don’t add up, but all ...

You're insignificant On the map of the world Because this line is pretty long compared to the others I would make it two lines here. spread out for humanity to ...

Don't worry, it isn't long at all. Just some nitpicks: His order came in the form of a cup of purple sludge. The barista boy stared at it with a ...

O.K., so right now I feel like this poem is more sentences than lines. There is lots of un-needed words, if you take them out it will help the rhythm, ...

The Mist is the aftermath of a rain pour (I don't know I just think you could use a more descriptive word for the rain like down pour. Rain pour ...

O.K., I totally get what you mean when you say you have to come to your own conclusions. I was just forced to write a poem like this for school. ...

First, like blue said sometimes colors are hard to read and you might want to make some of the lighter ones darker because right now I had to concentrate to ...

I like to push. Over beyond the horizon, I imagine what it could be like when the horizon disappears and there is nothing and everything will there be anything at ...