Calligraphy

This a review. DUN Dun dun. ;) Hi Tazmania! Now, I see you have many 'Chapter ones' so I do hope you stick with this one. Honestly, I've never finished ...

Hi Lizzie. This story seems to jump right into the action, but this doesn't look like the start of the story because it is 'secret 17'. Are the 'secrets' like ...

Hi Voodo! This is a great start to a novel, though the way you end it makes it feel more like a hook put on the back of a book. ...

Still, I absolutely love this! It was amazing! Okay so first I want to tell you what I thought it meant or what I got out of it because when ...

*Likes* Well, I would if the new YWS still had that feature. This chapter was great and just as good as the first one. Though it didn't really take the ...

Ahh, Title-Down Poetry! Or, at least that is what I think they called it in middle school. I haven't read this type of poetry in forever, and it is nice ...

Hi TheWritersDream Evenslily, so this is a good piece, but like TaylorTheGreat said it has lots of grammar problems. I am going to quote the whole piece and review as ...

Hi again meep! I am even more intrigued about what this story is all about now. I really want to know what happens next even though a lot didn't happen ...

Hi Meep. So I found this very good. I like your characters so far and your grammar is fairly good so it wasn't difficult to read. Actually the only grammar ...

I dream. This is very good, and if you would let me know when you get more up that would be great! I really want to read more of this ...

Hi David. So, this seems like a good start to a novel, but like AJT I feel like it should catch my attention more. I know that you are trying ...

Hi Creations. As far as the contest goes this is pretty dang good! Maybe it was better because I was listening to metal music, but I don't think so. The ...

Hi, so far I am utterly confused about this piece. That could be because I haven't read any of the earlier parts, but I'm not sure what part of the ...

Hi Xriegon! Okay, so this is really short and I know it is just some random flash fiction so this review probably won't be too long. Because this is so ...

Hi 13, again! So, from your P.M. I guessed that you had updated this again just as many times as you have sent me updates? I'm just going to review ...