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Re: cause = time
floodlights! Whether you're considering privating this or not, I want to emphasize that I love this poem (whatever that may be worth :] )! The first line sets the tone ...
Jul 31, 2025 -
Re: seasons don't save me
Hi FireEyes! Bear with me while I attempt to review for the first time in quite a while... The language throughout this really is what drew me in, and I ...
Jun 16, 2025 -
Re: a spider on a wet mirror
Hey there! :) I love poems exploring themes of loneliness; I find myself often gravitating towards it both when writing and reading! So, needless to say I was instantly drawn ...
Aug 8, 2024 -
Re: i will bury you in time
Hi dissonance! Always refreshing reading your poetry, no matter how heartbreaking or emotional it is. This poem especially drew me in with the subject matter. Loss of any kind is ...
Aug 8, 2024 -
Re: forwardsbeckonrebound
Really love what you have here, foxtails! I know you have plenty of reviews already, but I wanted to go ahead and share my thoughts should they be of any ...
Aug 4, 2024 -
Re: i hope you have a nice life (i hope i am in it)
Hey there, spatula! Love reading more of your poetry, you have such a unique voice. :] I'm not sure how constructive this review will be, as I enjoyed this poem ...
Mar 26, 2023 -
Re: in the mirror i saw my life’s erosion
Hey niteowl! So I really enjoyed the concept behind this - the connection of natural landscape with the landscape of skin features is really clever. And comparing a seemingly "timeless" ...
Mar 26, 2023 -
Re: broken identities i wish i could throw away
Hi FireEyes! So wow, this poem hit hard
Mar 17, 2023 -
Re: in a box under my bed
Hey LadyBug! So wow, I really love this whole idea! I think my favorite part of the poem was the first half; the image of wadded up receipts is really ...
Mar 11, 2023 -
Re: Ode to My Blush
Hello VintageGirl! As someone who experiences firsthand uncontrollable blushing, I was instantly drawn to your poem. I think it speaks volumes in your ability to draw upon an insecurity and ...
Mar 5, 2023 -
Re: estranged (i am the only living ghost in the family tree)
Hi mothbroth! Popping over here just to leave a quick review on this lovely poem of yours :] Reading through the poem, I definitely noted and enjoyed the tangible somber ...
Sep 1, 2022 -
Re: summer's last breath
Hello there! Saw this poem a couple of days ago and wanted to look at it deeper and share my thoughts, hope you don't mind! :] First of all, I ...
Aug 2, 2022 -
Re: treasures
Hello HikariHateke! First off, I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme going on - it definitely adds a rhythm and flow to the poem. The only thing I would mention would ...
Jul 11, 2022 -
Re: lessons on rebirth
Hello erilea! Here to review your poem. Quick disclaimer: this is my first review so if I miss a few things/something doesn't make sense, that's why (I'm still learning, haha)! ...
Jun 13, 2022
