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to chew on our cheeks and stare at the moon

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: cause = time

    floodlights! Whether you're considering privating this or not, I want to emphasize that I love this poem (whatever that may be worth :] )! The first line sets the tone ...

    Jul 31, 2025
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: seasons don't save me

    Hi FireEyes! Bear with me while I attempt to review for the first time in quite a while... The language throughout this really is what drew me in, and I ...

    Jun 16, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: a spider on a wet mirror

    Hey there! :) I love poems exploring themes of loneliness; I find myself often gravitating towards it both when writing and reading! So, needless to say I was instantly drawn ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i will bury you in time

    Hi dissonance! Always refreshing reading your poetry, no matter how heartbreaking or emotional it is. This poem especially drew me in with the subject matter. Loss of any kind is ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forwardsbeckonrebound

    Really love what you have here, foxtails! I know you have plenty of reviews already, but I wanted to go ahead and share my thoughts should they be of any ...

    Aug 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: i hope you have a nice life (i hope i am in it)

    Hey there, spatula! Love reading more of your poetry, you have such a unique voice. :] I'm not sure how constructive this review will be, as I enjoyed this poem ...

    Mar 26, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: in the mirror i saw my life’s erosion

    Hey niteowl! So I really enjoyed the concept behind this - the connection of natural landscape with the landscape of skin features is really clever. And comparing a seemingly "timeless" ...

    Mar 26, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: broken identities i wish i could throw away

    Hi FireEyes! So wow, this poem hit hard

    Mar 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: in a box under my bed

    Hey LadyBug! So wow, I really love this whole idea! I think my favorite part of the poem was the first half; the image of wadded up receipts is really ...

    Mar 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Ode to My Blush

    Hello VintageGirl! As someone who experiences firsthand uncontrollable blushing, I was instantly drawn to your poem. I think it speaks volumes in your ability to draw upon an insecurity and ...

    Mar 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: estranged (i am the only living ghost in the family tree)

    Hi mothbroth! Popping over here just to leave a quick review on this lovely poem of yours :] Reading through the poem, I definitely noted and enjoyed the tangible somber ...

    Sep 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: summer's last breath

    Hello there! Saw this poem a couple of days ago and wanted to look at it deeper and share my thoughts, hope you don't mind! :] First of all, I ...

    Aug 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: treasures

    Hello HikariHateke! First off, I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme going on - it definitely adds a rhythm and flow to the poem. The only thing I would mention would ...

    Jul 11, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lessons on rebirth

    Hello erilea! Here to review your poem. Quick disclaimer: this is my first review so if I miss a few things/something doesn't make sense, that's why (I'm still learning, haha)! ...

    Jun 13, 2022


If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn