Caiti97

Hi! I liked your story! The plot was concise and intriguing and left me with questions throughout the read. I especially liked the second paragraph. I got a foreboding feeling ...

Hi! I enjoyed reading your story. The plot was engaging and promising! I would definitely read more. But in order to make your story more powerful, the language could be ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. The beat flowed smoothly and the concept was definitely captivating. The only place where I felt like the rhythm was broken was the line ...

Hi! I really like the idea of this poem, it's original and unique. I'm always drawn to fantasy, so I really enjoyed it. I think the only way to make ...

Hi! My first impression of your poem was that it was really good. The words flow well together and the rhythm is constant, which definitely held my attention. In addition, ...

Hi! This piece was really amazing. I love the way you immediately establish the strong, likable qualities of the guardian angel. This is one of the best examples of showing ...

Hi! First of all this, piece was really well done. You capture the raw feelings of anger and sadness and confusion so well. I think the last line best captures ...

Hi I definitely think that your first paragraphs would be catchier if you varied your sentence structure. Currently they're all about the same length and make the narrative seem a ...

I really like the premise of your story! My suggestions are that you try to vary your sentence structure (a lot of them start with 'I') a little just to ...

Your title is really appealing! As my favorite color is admittedly black, I couldn't help reading your essay, and I really enjoyed it! Rather than just stating the facts, however, ...

This story was definitely engaging. I think that your initial hook was really well done. The dialogue was fantastic as well; I think that it clearly portrays the individual voice ...