Cailey

Well I think maybe this is worth a shot at going back to. And since it's been that long maybe just start over completely, using the same idea and characters, ...

Yes. I am working on it. Little by little I'll take over the world, I mean, the site, again. Good. We can do this, Veeren, we can get back into ...

Awe, thanks, Veer! I haven't been able to spend hardly any time on YWS, and figured it might be good to post something, and this was something I wrote and ...

Thank you for the great review!

Thanks for the review!!

Yes! I like the changes a lot!

Yep. Definitely. ;)

:D It was all the blood that I liked the most.

My thoughts: "Veeren posted something? Woah! Must read, ah, well, slenderman, maybe not.." After reading the first line: "This is great. I'll read all of it. I might even forgive ...

Thanks! Every once in a while I like to just make some silly nonsensical poem about hedgehogs. :D

I was actually trying to keep the situation a little bit vague so that the reader could assume the situation to fit his or her own life and interpret it ...

Oh, I guess I missed that part. So yeah, this was a good way to write down an idea for later.

Totally sitting here repeating fah-sod fah-sard fah-sod fah-sard...

I'm sorry, this isn't a review, but I just wanted to say that I really liked this poem.

Oh, okay, that makes sense. As I said I never learned those rules.. :)