Cailey

Hey there, Cailey here for a review. First of all. You said this is just a draft. However, even for a draft this is ridiculously uneditted. Let me give you ...

Hey there, Cailey here for a review! I didn't read any of the other chapters, just realized that this was the one with the least amount of comments, so I ...

Wow, first of all, this was really long! :) Not necessarily a bad thing, though. I like the concept, although I was confused by the ending. Do you actaully tell ...

Hey there, I'm here with your review! I like this. It has a very nice rhythm, very dancingish and magicish and mysticalish. (Yep, those are definitely all real words.) I'm ...

Are you Australian? Hello, Cailey here with your review! I like it, although in my mind it seemed not so poetical. It was nice, but I think it's more proselike ...

Hello there, Cailey here with a review! Alright, nice poem, nice topic. So true that there are too often people in power who know nothing about the people they rule ...

Hey there, Cailey here with a review! Alright, so you said that what you're really looking for is comments on your style, right? I think this is good, you have ...

Well, this is definitely different. I noticed it was stuck in a folder called failed poetry, so I decided that I absolutely had to review it. So I did. I ...

Hello, Cailey here with the requested review! :) First off, beautiful. I love it, and you have some great imagery and detail. I love that you never once say she's ...

Hello there, Cailey here with a review! :) Polinka wrote: "One criticism I may have is that this is all in one big block, and it looks quite heavy. Consider ...

Yay! I've been meaning to review something of yours for a long time. Normally I would ask if there was one you specifically wanted to have reviewed, but I found ...

Hey there, Cailey here for the review! :) So, I like this. It's very hectic and as I read I felt very rushed. That could also be because I'm tired ...

Hey there, here for your review! :) First off, spaces!!! Typos!!! I know that you could have caught at least half of the mistakes in here if you reread this. ...

Hello there, Cailey here to review. :) This was super interesting, and made me laugh. I'm hoping you meant for this to be humorous? When I started, I was wondering ...

Hey there, Cailey here fot the review. This remined me a lot of myself. And my sister, Molly, who hates Mondays more than anyone. Okay, so I liked this little ...