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Caerulean

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Adoption [Edited]

    Wow. That is nice! ^_^ My problem is: I didn't really get it...like completely get it. There were confusing parts. Maybe, you could make it clearer? But I love the ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Little Macey (0)

    Hi there. ^_^ :D First of all, I've got a few nitpicks for you: If she moved they would get her. - Comma after 'moved' The black crack between the ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As if I Never Existed

    That was a nice poem. ^_^ :D I like the simplicity of it and how it is direct to the point. And you did a good job making me feel ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]

    That is really a great song! (I didn't read the lyrics though xD. I just watched the vid) The video is great too! There's so much effort that's put into ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Piano Boy

    Hi there! :D That is really a beautiful poem! ^_^ Nitpicks: Sing the chorus to your song, piano boy, - Perhaps, it is more correct if you used 'of' instead ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mr.Silence Must Die

    (OMG! WHERE DID MY REVIEW GO!? DARN THIS INTERNET CONNECTION! >.< Good thing my browser remembered most of my review!) Hi, Sol! ^_^ :D Nitpicks: So listen what I'm going ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Face of Fear

    Hi! :D I'm sick of this now,how much shall I endure? - You forgot to put a space after the comma here. These people they watch, they point, and they ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Trying to Define Art

    This is something a poor reader like me wouldn't understand. >.< It's rather exaggerated and quick. It's like an explosion to me, as simple as that - a quick literary ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Is this love?

    Hi there. :) You write poems fast xD. Nitpicks: You are struck from behind, by none other than cupid. - I don't think there should be a comma after 'behind'. ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: To The Shore

    Another great story by Pink! I mean, dad. XD :D Nitpicks: If evening tides could wash away all your worries, would you let me take your hand and walk you ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 9

    Oh my gosh. I love this! This is what I call poetry! xD It's so beautiful! :D And I can feel the words just by reading it! Yet, you didn't ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deleted 8

    For me, this is high poetry - I can't understand it It's filled with really poetic, beautiful words...Fine, I simply didn't understand it. lol I don't have the best vocabulary ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH

    FINALLY! I'M DONE READING THIS! :D Sorry for the major delay, twin. :) Nitpicks! : Next to it were two wooden doors – like wardrobe doors because of their flowery ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Happy Valentine's Day

    Ooh! You got featured again! Yay! xD :D Nitpicks: The night before the calendar said fourteen - I think 'fourteen' should be in quotation marks or apostrophes. We hang up ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Happy Valentine's Day YWS! =)

    I saw my picture and thought to myself, Ah, okay. lol Nice song, by the way. :) Not the best audio quality though. The video was nicely put together too. ...

    Feb 12, 2011


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind