Happy Valentine's Day YWS! =)

by Jashael

Published February 11, 2011

In Songs

The vid you're all been waiting for...

...or maybe not. :lol:

Anyway, here it goes...

Before you read on, listen to the song HERE while watching the epic faces of our YWSers. LOL I wanted more people to be in it. But since I've procrastinated this project enough, I had to rush the video.

Spoiler! :
SPECIAL THANKS for the following YWSers (for their photos):

baywolf25
Skins
Whisperer
Flower~Child
Warrior Princess
Tigersprite
Kitty15
ScarletteRose
Spitfire
ultraviolet
borntobeawriter
Yuriiko
PinkShearwater
Persephoneia
icepriness
Flower~Child
VitaminCakes
Day
Bondgirl007
Shubs!
jolene XD

.....who else I missed? I'm sleepy. *snores*


A SIMPLE LOVE SONG

by JASH BAGABALDO


I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me
When there’s not even a minute without me thinking of you
There’s something from you that I really wanna reach
(It’s your heart)
And I know I’m being impulsive to move

I’m still having second thoughts today
'Cause there’s just ain’t a thing not even one
For me to feel this way
Are you worth it?
...worth to be desperate upon?

This melody’s stuck in my head
These words that I have never said
Are all that I know
And I can’t seem to let go
For now I’m just too occupied
By things I can’t explain and deep inside
I hope I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just so in love with you

I’d laugh at your face every time that you try
To throw everyone your hilarious smile
I fell for
I won’t get caught uneasy by your side
So nobody could tell that I keep wishing you were mine

Just give me a quick stare
And you’ll remain a clueless guy
You may think that I don’t care
But I do
If you just lock your eyes on mine

This melody’s stuck in my head
These words that I have never said
Are all that I know
And I can’t seem to let go
For now I’m just too occupied
By things I can’t explain and deep inside
I hope I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just so in love with you

I’m more than a half-page down*
Don’t wanna see you around
For awhile
'Cause I don’t wanna get too close to you
Someday I might just open up
Though I know this song ain’t enough
I’m afraid to know what’s true

This melody’s stuck in my head
These words that I have never said
Are all that I know
And I can’t seem to let go
For now I’m just too occupied
By things I can’t explain and deep inside
I hope I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just so in love with you

Don’t wanna wait for this to end
'Cause I’m definitely sure that I’ll regret
Chances come and go
I need you badly to know
That for now I’m just too occupied
By your looks, your laughs, and your charming smiles
I hope that I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just a girl that’s so in love…
…with you!

And I hope you'll learn to sing along
Flow with the harmony of this simple love song... ♥






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I wrote this when I was fourteen. And well... the song will speak for itself. I don't wanna update it or anything. It's "a simple love song"... so yeah. I wanted to leave it in its simple form...

*this is probably a weird line, but for me, it kind of means... well, I was writing the song, and I was shocked of how long the song was becoming -- I was half-page down a yellow bond paper, plus my writing was small. So yeah, it's kind of random. But as I said, I don't wanna edit anything. And it's just one line. :P

I think the most meaningful line for me here is... This melody’s stuck in my head. Because it's so true. I had the melody first and it got stuck, and then the happening became a line. Plus it reminds me of my innocence a couple of years ago. LOL So yeah...

Thank you so much for reading, and/or listening. :D I hope you liked it!
And don't forget to LIKE it if you do! :D

If you wanna hear other songs from me, just follow the page Sol made: here. Thanks! :D

And oh...

.o♥ Happy Valentines ♥o.


Everyone who responded to me (whether you're in the vid or not) will get gifts from me. :D SPREAD THE LOOOOOOOOOOVE.

Spoiler! :
Sorry for the poor audio quality.

Comments & reviews · 29
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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Mar 7, 2011

Whut? O_o

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crestfallen
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crestfallen wrote a review Review · Mar 7, 2011

I agree with this person...."This is great Jashy,

I really enjoyed it. Your lines were meaningfull.

My favourite was the video thingy. Now I want to know who is who.
I guess I'm too curious for my own good. Some people are real posers. I'm thinking thats skinsy but I'll have to find out somehow.

Makes mind up to stalk the photo's

Well done Jashy.
On line bugged me a teeeny bit,

I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me

It doesn't really make that much sense. Forgettable to me? I'm not even sure what your trying to say. Is it-I'm trying to make it seem like you're easy to foget or something along those lines?

I know you dont really want to edit but I just wanted to point that out.

Good job with the video. It was my total fave.

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jolene
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jolene commented Comment · Feb 16, 2011

you forgot my name!!!! Lol

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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Feb 15, 2011

Thank you so much ya'll!!! :D

harshita3chaarag commented Comment · Feb 15, 2011

well...hey!! nice song...and the video is pretty nice too.....loved it!!:D

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Lil_Pau
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Lil_Pau wrote a review Review · Feb 14, 2011

Like the title, it's a simple song, but very meaningful. The lyrics convey their message wonderfully, and the whole arrangement actually fits the song. I love this, poor audio quality or not. <3 <3

Good job! Have a Happy Valentine's Day! :D

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Kafkaescence
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Kafkaescence wrote a review Review · Feb 14, 2011

Wow...I watched the video, and this was very well put together. Actually, I think the "half page down" line somehow fits. It makes you think, and can definitely be interpreted as romantic. I really like the chorus, by the way. And happy Valentine's Day to you too!

-Kafka

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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Feb 14, 2011

Hey, guys! Thank you so much. :)

Jo, maybe next time, kay? :D

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XxMattxX
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XxMattxX wrote a review Review · Feb 13, 2011

This is so cute. I love it.
Sorry i couldn't send you my pic. Haven't gone on for a about two or three days to due extracurricular activities.
But this is really cute.
God really gave you some talent!
God bless!
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-jojo.

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EmmaJane
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EmmaJane commented Comment · Feb 13, 2011

All YWS are so pretty! (: ..You evil people. :p

Jash, it was so good: the singing and the video. SUCH a sweet song, too. You're so talented. (:

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Rydia
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Rydia commented Comment · Feb 13, 2011

It's lovely! The lyrics are well composed and the video is beautiful, very nicely done!

lovethelifeulive commented Comment · Feb 13, 2011

Hi!
Wow, that was amzing!
You have the sweetest voice
AND YOU ARE SOOOOOO PRETTY!
Where were you in the video, onstage?
Wow, that was sooo kewl! The lyrics were very sweet to!
You have magic skillllllz! I hope you post more songs like this!

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stargazer9927
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stargazer9927 commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Beautiful. And if that's you singing you have an amazing voice. And to write this at only fourteen is amazing! Keep it up and I hope to hear more.

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Razcoon
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Razcoon wrote a review Review · Feb 12, 2011

Em looks EXACTLY how I imagined her! That being said, Skype. xD Oh, and a few other people, like Warrior Princess (whose avatars are her own pictures) and Bondgirl007 (again, Skype, though not often at all...still, I've seen her) And I look exactly how I imagined me! 'Cept I wasn't in your video. Shame. Cute video, cute song. :3

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borntobeawriter
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borntobeawriter commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

hahah! I bursted out laughing when you said the 'fool' lyric and my sister's picture appeared. Oh, Lord. Can't wait to see her face.

This was great, Jashy. You're awesome <3

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Sins
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Sins wrote a review Review · Feb 12, 2011

ZOMG, I <3 this, Jashy.

I like people not knowing who I am... You were actually aloud to have my name by the picture of me in the video, but I obviously forgot to tell you... :lol: I like it not being there now though. It makes people guess who I am. Even if the picture you chose of me made me cringe... xD I look funny in it.

Basically, Jash, you rock. :P

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LittlePetRock
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LittlePetRock commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

I love it Jash!! I think my face is somewhere around 2:00. :D I 'EEEeep'-ed when I saw it!
Everyone looks lovely and your song is magnificent!

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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Sorry for the poor audio quality. Oh, please don't remind me... I've forgiven them... LOL :D

Icy, the blue eye at the "just give me a quick stare" is Skins'. :D

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iceprincess
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iceprincess wrote a review Review · Feb 12, 2011

Oh my god, Jashie.

I don't even.

This song is pretty good by itself already, but with the pics of tons of YWS-ers inside the video, I'm completely mindblown right now and I can't even form a rational thought so.

Good song is good, the sky is blue, bad audio is bad, Ice fails at reviewing, etc. *likes*

Shrubbery wrote:YWS-ers are prettier people than anyone I know.


I know, right? :P

Happy [early] Valentine's Day, everyone! ♥

P.S: Where is Skins in the video, anyway? I'm guessing she's the girl at 1:23.

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Caerulean
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Caerulean wrote a review Review · Feb 12, 2011

I saw my picture and thought to myself, Ah, okay. lol Nice song, by the way. :) Not the best audio quality though. The video was nicely put together too. :)

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MiaParamore
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MiaParamore commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Haha, no I meant the list. I thought you were asking for that. :P

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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Thanks, Shubs... and what do you mean by I missed you? :lol: You were at the last two lines. It was perfect there. LOL Holding that mic and stuff. HAHAHA

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MiaParamore
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MiaParamore wrote a review Review · Feb 12, 2011

You missed...ME? Awesome song, and wow, YWS-ers are prettier people than anyone I know. <3 Happy Valentine's Day to all here, and hope you have it the best. :D

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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Kind of crowd? :\ A decent one, I guess. L-)

I know right? HAHA....

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Jenthura
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Jenthura commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Awesomeness! What sort of crowd were you performing before? :D
Seeing all those YWS'ers was kinda weird, they certainly aren't like I imagined them.

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Jashael
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Jashael commented Comment · Feb 12, 2011

Thank you so much guys! :D

Kaka, I'll put up their names, and let you know.

Sisters, thanks! I hope you liked it. ;)

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Ranger Hawk
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Ranger Hawk commented Comment · Feb 11, 2011

Beautiful, Jash! Loved the video, it was wonderfully put together. Happy Valentines! :D

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Kagi
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Kagi wrote a review Review · Feb 11, 2011

This is great Jashy,

I really enjoyed it. Your lines were meaningfull.

My favourite was the video thingy. Now I want to know who is who.
I guess I'm too curious for my own good. Some people are real posers. I'm thinking thats skinsy but I'll have to find out somehow.

Makes mind up to stalk the photo's

Well done Jashy.
On line bugged me a teeeny bit,

I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me


It doesn't really make that much sense. Forgettable to me? I'm not even sure what your trying to say. Is it-I'm trying to make it seem like you're easy to foget or something along those lines?

I know you dont really want to edit but I just wanted to point that out.

Good job with the video. It was my total fave.
Kaka xxx

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Yuriiko
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Yuriiko wrote a review Review · Feb 11, 2011

Oh my Jash!

This is awesome, I tell you. At first I didn't know why you were going to take my profile picture and it was quite a surprise when I just saw mine in your video. Anyways, the lyrics complements well with the month of hearts. I'm not sure if there's something wrong with the lyrics and I don't even think this is a review.

*high fives*

~yuri



MMM HYD R A T I O N
— cherie