Cadi

alliyah, this poem is a delight! It beautifully illustrates a kind of anxiety about feelings and doing things wrong, which I hard relate to. Thank you for sharing it! I ...

Woah, suddenly weeks happened! The time jump at the start here threw me a bit, after the slower pace of the earlier chapters. (But that might be less the case ...

Hi BiruKun! This is a highly relatable poem you've got here - I think a whole load of people can relate to trying to hide their feelings for fear of ...

Hi Katnes! Since you've specifically asked about comma placement and spelling, that's what I'll be focusing on for this review. This is probably going to be easiest if I just ...

Hi Kate! Welcome to YWS - I hope you're enjoying the site so far :) In this piece, you're using a very clear metaphor for anger (fire!) - you get ...

Hi Lauren! It's me, your thoroughly intermittent reviewer, here to continue enthusing about this story and how I'm super into it and looking forward to next week already! You're continuing ...

Okay, yep, this story continues in excellence! I didn't comment on part 1, but I love the poetic narration style you're using (and I love spotting bits and pieces from ...

Hi Hattable! Let's dive straight in... First up: very cool premise! What I'm seeing here is a bunch of immortal characters who've worked out that they're immortal, and reacted to ...

Hi, Banana! Before I get going, I see you're quite new to YWS, so I just wanna say, welcome! I hope you're enjoying the site so far! I have to ...

Hi Jevan! I see you joined recently, so before I get on with this review, welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here so far. You've chosen a cool ...

Hi Baezel! Thanks for posting this essay - I hadn't heard of Rita Levi-Montalcini before, and it was very interesting to read a bit about her life and work. This ...

Hi fukase, This is an interesting poem! Thunderstorms are a great metaphor to play around with, and you've got some lovely lines in here. A couple of my favourite bits ...

Hi pricklyash! This is quite a sweet, short piece. I definitely get a good sense of the feelings you're aiming to get across with this - namely, grief for a ...

Hey Stella! Congrats on your first #outsideyourcomfortzone piece! I think this is really well done. The description of the heat at the start is incredible. The lines about your lungs ...

Hi manilla! Cadi here, for a review. To start off with: I really like the metaphor you're using here, and all the various images you tie in with it - ...