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XD Pride and Prejudice. You hit the nail on the head. Would it please you to know this was written not long after I watched the movie and started reading ...

*Locked* There are buckets of recent topics in need of critiques. This, on the other hand, is from 2004, and doesn't need to be dragged up!

*Locked* Some threads, like pie left a few months in back of the refrigerator, are simply too old to be revived.

*locked* Look at the date before posting on old threads!

fine then :cry: I'm really sad but I need to ask a question how do I get rid of it? Do you want to get rid of the centering, or ...

Hmm. I can understand why you like those two lines at the end of S3. If you want to keep them, I would at least advise replacing the word 'gushes' ...

Thanks, all! Gadi and Leja - thanks for your suggestions regarding word choice. Gadi, I do like, however, 'the writing of poetry'. I feel that saying only 'poetry' would 1) ...

suprising this thread hasn't been locked. Some other threads about abortion have been. this could start an argument but then again it's a poem. But to the other reviewers of ...

Congratulations. You made a list of onomatopoeia and posted it in the Poetry forum.

Thank you all for commenting! I've posted kind-of-an-edit. JezzaP - I agree with your comment that it didn't sound "poetic" enough. It drives me crazy in my own poetry. Lil_Pau ...

Haha, it's not that obscure, and I don't really listen to Bright Eyes. But I'll still be your best friend. Of course, we get mixed messages in writing. On the ...

Haha, thanks, Snoink. I don't much care for it. It was written during physics class (the AP is next Monday and I'm gonna die). Thank you for correcting me on ...

*locked* Your subtitle reads that a friend wrote this poem. Please only post your own work.

Be careful of confusing line breaks with punctuation; a line break does not denote a pause. Other than that, Suzanne's response was very good. She knows her stuff.

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