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Hi, thank you first of all for reading my poem. Thank you for your concern. I have been struggling a lot this past year with how I feel. After coming ...

Thank you, as I said with blackblade, I used "oh" because that's what I've seen people say as a reaction to these emotions. Thank you, I have been feeling really ...

Hi, thank you for the review. I am grateful that you took the time to not only read my poem but give feedback on it. I am glad you noticed ...

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Hi! I just want to say, I hope this went good for you at school, and this seems so cool! I like the second part and especially the way it ...

Hi! I was not really sure what I expected when I clicked on this after reading the description but it definitely was not this. Although this is good, I feel ...

Thank you so much! And sorry about your dogs, I had a dog too that I lost so I understand. %uD83D%uDE42

Thank you so much for the advice. I am going to make the character (second character) a girl as you said because I was also reading over it and they ...

Thank you so much for the help. The advice with the commas is useful not only for my story but because I am 14 years old so therefore I can ...

I like this poem because I can feel the emotions and the choice of words helps that, I like the morbidity of some descriptions. This work is really intriguing to ...

Thank you :) Hearing that someone else felt and understood this meant a lot to me :)

I did the 'until' parts because in my mind they were different statements and when I drafted this I made that clear but when I posted it I'm guessing it ...

thank you so much, this was just me letting my feelings out and I'm glad you liked it, as for the part were at the beginning i was going back, ...

Thank you ^_^ also I will be removing that comma! :)