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Re: Little Birdie
Thanks! Totally does!
Sun Apr 30, 2017 5:40 pm -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
This made me tear up :( this is amazing. Keep it up :)
Tue Apr 25, 2017 3:10 am -
Re: I remember...
Love this!! Idk if it was intentional, but I like that there is no period in the last line. Lol. Hard to explain but it fits in...like intensifies the ending...oh ...
Wed Apr 19, 2017 2:02 am -
Re: Little Birdie
Thanks! Really appreciate this, very helpful :)
Wed Apr 19, 2017 1:56 am -
Re: Pure Baby
Well done!
Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:33 pm -
Re: Little Birdie
No worries! Any opinions are welcome and helpful. Thanks!
Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:13 pm -
Re: Little Birdie
I appreciate your input! I'll consider. I do like the vagueness of the poem though, idk. But like Sheyren said, it's metaphorical (it's not actually a bird lol). Thanks!
Sat Apr 15, 2017 10:46 pm -
Re: Little Birdie
Thanks!! :)
Sat Apr 15, 2017 3:00 pm -
Re: I Am Fairly Sure I Am A Reincarnation Of Guy Fawkes' Hidden Fear of Fire
Oh my gosh this is amazing
Tue Apr 04, 2017 5:12 am -
Re: Trees--Chapter 2 (part 1)
Thanks! Really helpful!
Mon Mar 27, 2017 7:41 pm -
Re: Trees--Chapter 2 (part 1)
Thank you for your time! Sorry for the late response, I've been busy lately and haven't had much time. Will definitely consider :) thanks
Mon Mar 27, 2017 7:39 pm -
Re: The Petals Fall at Night
I really appreciate the review! You hit on all the major parts I was struggling with. Idk why I couldn't figure out a better way to word those seems to ...
Tue Mar 14, 2017 11:51 pm -
Re: The Place I Know You
Thank you very much! This is very helpful, and I will look into editing the work based on your review. And yes- -I guess one could take this as a ...
Fri Dec 30, 2016 6:12 am -
Re: Friends
Np :D
Thu Dec 08, 2016 6:30 am -
Re: Snow ramblings
I think the whole magic of the piece IS the cliffhanger. But I guess it just comes down to personal preference: 'D
Tue Dec 06, 2016 6:58 am