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Thanks! Totally does!

This made me tear up :( this is amazing. Keep it up :)

Love this!! Idk if it was intentional, but I like that there is no period in the last line. Lol. Hard to explain but it fits in...like intensifies the ending...oh ...

Thanks! Really appreciate this, very helpful :)

Well done!

No worries! Any opinions are welcome and helpful. Thanks!

I appreciate your input! I'll consider. I do like the vagueness of the poem though, idk. But like Sheyren said, it's metaphorical (it's not actually a bird lol). Thanks!

Thanks!! :)

Oh my gosh this is amazing

Thanks! Really helpful!

Thank you for your time! Sorry for the late response, I've been busy lately and haven't had much time. Will definitely consider :) thanks

I really appreciate the review! You hit on all the major parts I was struggling with. Idk why I couldn't figure out a better way to word those seems to ...

Thank you very much! This is very helpful, and I will look into editing the work based on your review. And yes- -I guess one could take this as a ...

Np :D

I think the whole magic of the piece IS the cliffhanger. But I guess it just comes down to personal preference: 'D