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Hannah ty for gracing me with this and

Can't tell if this is based off of many poems on this same subject (including some that I have written as well) or if this imagery is just that much ...

hi im here ily

thx bb

*it might work better >_>

I might work better as a short lined poem with more consistent line length, but that might also just be my own style influencing that. I tend to find poems ...

I think I see what you're trying to do with the weight in those words? But they'd really carry it by themselves already imo, so it's not necessary. It just ...

Hi there! I thought this was nice the and the structure is quite nice. However, I think a lot of weakness lies in the very passive language. Phrases like, "many ...

good talk

Even if you don't have a better understanding of someone's work, all opinions help the writer grow and understand how they work on their own. Reading someone else's opinion, even ...

don't do this

ahh you got it and also, sorry, I wrote this last november so I'm not really back-back but ily anyway

This isn't a poem, it's a rant --and not even a rant about a valid point.