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I love your command of language and word choice. It really does make for a remarkable poem. This was another great piece- the ending seemed a bit abrupt to me, ...

Nice piece you have here- I do think that there are perhaps some changes that could be made though. There were some unrealistic parts in this- the transition from being ...

I liked this piece... the concept itself was interesting and quite originally done. The voice was very different from most other things I've read. I would consider incorporating more emotion ...

This was a wonderful piece.... I love the ending. I would work on making the dialog a bit more natural, but other than that, I think this was fantastic. You ...

This is a nice piece- the title and first two lines REALLY remind me of the Dandy Warhols song, but the rest is different. I think that this could definitely ...

I loved the concept behind this- the generator can be pretty difficult to use, as the prompts can be quite outlandish, but you definitely made this work. I love the ...

I have to agree with the other review- try incorporating some genuine love, some imagery, some emotion of another type. There's a lot of repetition in this, and a lot ...

I actually loved this piece- except for the last line. It made all the rest seem ingenuine. It destroyed the gorgeous imagery and fantastical pictures. I would omit it entirely. ...

This is so short and simple, and absolutely wonderful. I love the repetition in the word choice, the (kind of) play on words, and the little words of wisdom. Concise, ...

I think that this was done well- I would think about perhaps expressing more horror in the beginning, making it seem more personal instead of a textbook description. Don't just ...

I think that this was good- I would try to stay away from cliche images, and keep the tone though. Also, run this through spellcheck. I would focus on some ...

Hi there- so I thought this was really good, a nice opening to a story. I do think that perhaps you could change some things. First- remember to always keep ...

This was a beautiful piece- I didn't understand it completely, and it may have just been my inability to read further into poetry. Anywho- you used gorgeous phrasing, and a ...

Hi there- So, I thought this was good- great imagery and descriptions. However, I found it a bit repetitive. It seemed to describe growing old very well, but seemed bland ...

This was excellent! I was reading, reading, reading, and then came to the word "merpeople" and immediately stopped. Winced. And then continued. And it wasn't what I expected at all. ...