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Nice piece; I can relate in a whole lot of ways. I would try to introduce the character to the emotion a bit more though. Really show your anguish; if ...

Hi there :) So, I thought this was a nice piece; you expressed the emotion with great clarity and vividness. However, the repetition just didn't work for me. In a ...

I really liked this personally- especially the end. I think that it could be changed in a couple of different ways, maybe varying the beginnings of each line a bit ...

So, my review is going to be even more useless. Sorry in advance. But I really did like this piece; it has super interesting and original imagery, which can be ...

Loved it! I loved the meter, the rhymes, the wonderful voice you've created. And the end was hilarious. It can be difficult to write in the style that you chose ...

So, first of all: there are a lot of spelling/grammatical errors and/or typos. Second of all: I would try to do more "showing" than "telling", and perhaps work on making ...

I HAVE A KID?! Kidding. Totally kidding. :P Anywho- I thought this was good. You have a great meter and a great story; however, I felt like you phrased things ...

Anything by Brandon Sanderson, Garth Nix, Diane Wynne Jones, George Orwell, Mickey Zucker Reichert, or Terry Brooks. The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss is by far my favorite ...

Okay- so first of all, as Flower mentioned, I would go through and correct this grammatically. I know it doesn't seem like a big deal, but errors like that create ...

I'm going to cop out on a real review for now, as I'm supposed to be getting ready for school. I'll just say this, and hope it conveys everything I ...

Beautiful piece altogether- wonderful imagery, and I love the continuance of the seasonal theme throughout the piece. As for the title, I would definitely choose Eros. Agape is often associated ...

Super cute :) I'd think about changing their expressions sometimes, and being more consistent with the lighting, but otherwise, this was super cute. :) Great job! I've always wanted to ...

Your poetry insecurities aren't well founded. :) Really nice piece- I love the emotion and absolute humanity behind your words- though I have to agree: the last line kind of ...

This was a beautiful piece- I just want to start off with that. But the tones and imagery from the two top and bottom halves seemed very different to me- ...

I think this is good- I'm interested to see what direction you take it in though. This could turn out to be really cliche or really original depending on where ...