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I liked this- it was original, and it was simple, and it was very well done. (I'm going to do a really short review, if you don't mind too terribly.) ...

That book sounds awesome! I'm a huge fan of 1984 and dystopian novels in general, so definitely sounds like my cup of tea. Thanks for giving us the heads up ...

So far, I really really like this. I think that you know exactly what you're doing, and you're in confident in doing it. There are a couple of things I ...

Okay, I just want to start with I LOVE THIS. You have an excellent command of language, you use repetition perfectly and powerfully, and your imagery is gorgeous and nicely ...

So, I have to agree with retro on a lot of accounts. Ease into the plot a little bit more. It shouldn't be too obvious; maybe hint at it towards ...

So, I've decided to be lazy. I'm only reviewing the first person one. :) I'll read both though, and give my opinion on it, of course :) Also, I'm going ...

So, I like this. I think that it could use some work, but it really has some great potential. I'm going to do something I rarely do, and work within ...

Hi there- so, I have to agree. This doesn't feel like a full song. Maybe a bridge or something? I would continue with this one and lengthen it out a ...

Goddamn (excuse my Czech), that was freakin' amazing. Teach me how to write, please? Seriously though; you have incredible word choices and language, and the imagery is simply fantastic. Sometimes, ...

Simply stated, but I think it's really effective. The second line feels a little awkwardly phrased to me, and I think that the imagery would sink in a bit more ...

Okay. I'm sorry now. I'm about to give a super lame review. So, I thought this was excellent. The ending was a little ambiguous, but as a whole, the poem's ...

Nice piece- I love the title and the word choice is very nice. I have to agree about the sing-song rhythm though. The rhyme scheme seems to dominate the poem, ...

This was a poignant piece- there were quite a few grammatical errors, but I'm sure that if you went through it again, you would catch it. I would create more ...

Personally, I have to start with I don't think that everyone poem needs a deep meaning behind it. Not everyone poem needs a story or a narrator... sometimes, it can ...

Okay, so believe it or not, this is kind of an experiment of sorts for me. I have never been ambitious enough to quote someone's work, and actually WORK in ...