Butterfinger

I love how you repeat that one line "You left her standing" because it really emphasizes the point of your poem. Love it!

You did a great job with this in my opinion! So many questions gets the reader really thinking beyond the page. Fantabulous!

There is absolutely nothing wrong with a depressing poem!! It's amazing when you run with a feeling-even a depressing one! Keep writing!

Haha- I was wondering if anyone would ask about that...Back when Edgar Allen Poe was writing, if someone was supposed dead, they would bury them but tie a string to ...

I have to say that it doesn't take long stanzas and pages of descriptive writing to make a poem. Your poem is perfect in it's simplicity and unique because of ...

Hey there! I love the simplicity of your writing and the beauty that comes from just a few chosen words. There are a few spelling errors, but you've got it ...

Wow...your story kept me racing down the page, hungering for more...it's beautiful in it's own way, and kind of creepy...keep writing!

This is really beautiful....I can imagine being there and seeing those sights....I'm not good at reviews, but I really like this one....keep writing!

I love the first part the most....beautiful images that really make you think about them, question them. This is a really good poem even if you think it's kinda rough!

Thanks thisisme! I wasn't really thinking about punctuation when I wrote it, but it could do with some. I guess I was just trying to get the words down and ...

Wow! This is amazing! I'm new here and your story stuck out to me out of all the others and I can't stop thinking about it, wondering what's next and ...