Hi Isha!
I understand that this poem is a bit old, and it was one of your first. I really like it though. It seems pretty much perfect to me - though there is always room for improvement. But to me at least, its perfect! It is so easy to relate to.
These have to be my favourite lines:
Isha wrote:So Daddy it's time to let go now,
to let your little girl go free.
You used great language and metaphors there, which was real nice to see. Just a fabulous poem!
Deanie x
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