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Re: "Just stay, you'll see."
I agree with sbitonti, great line! Keep working on it!
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: happy
Hahaha :) I love your noodle ;) Great job!
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: Halcyon days
Great start here! I like the idea of 'sprinkled sunlight.'
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Fragile
I have to say I love this. I love the length because with each line you create an image in my head and I have to keep reading to see ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Control
Wow. This actually gave me chills while reading. Not just because of the subject matter, but because of the word choice. Very powerful. Great job.
Jan 10, 2013 -
Re: I'll always be that little girl. (Oh, it'll never change)
I know your mom will love it! Do we get to hear it?
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Triad
You ought to think or you'd cease to be. Did you write this part or quote it?
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Just planting a moment
I don't find this chessy at all. Very beautiful writing! Vey well structures and yOu kept up the flow so it didn't drag at all. I was engaged throughout the ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Sinking
Very interesting. Not sure how I feel about it. Great work!
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: One Time Only
Wow, that's really deep Ty! Brilliant wording that paints a colorful picture. I applaud you! I'm not the best at lyrics, but Awesome work!
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Hanged
Hmmmmm....... I find this interesting and disturbing at the same time. Brilliant to say the least- you sure have a way with words! Keep it up!
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: My Cure
I love this!!!!! Simple- beautiful- brilliant!!!!
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Sun: Part I
Wow!! This is positively brilliant!!!! I love every line! The picture made it even better. I can't wait to read more of your work! Never stop writing!
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Countdown
Love this! Very interesting!
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Crossfire
Hi-ya! You've posted in the wrong category :^) great start!
Jun 28, 2011