Butterfinger

I can't believe you haven't gotten any review yet! How strange! Well, I for one, love this story start! It reminds me of when I would read the Redwall Series ...

I picture in my head Dr. Jekell and Mr. Hyde when I read this!It's almost as if when the narrator states they've married against their will that they've been fused ...

Well I'm glad to be your first reviewer! It is a bit depressing, but it sounds like in the end there is more hope to be chased after. I love ...

Hahahaha! This has a bright Dr. S. feel to it! Beautiful rhyming! Very entertaining, didn't make me at all bored! I hope it won in that competition because it truly ...

I like the base of this poem: socks. A different topic to write on and therefore, all the more difficult! That being said, it felt a bit dry, with out ...

Nursing an aluminum Coke can - one quarter full, three fourths empty - I like how you emphasize the amount of coke! replaying the pop of the tab - penetration, ...

Hello there! Wonderful piece that made me put my thinking cap on! I like the idea at the beginning about two figures looking about in the dark. I know the ...

This piece evokes a lot of imagery, that of a person being burned alive, and a sort of satisfaction of the narrator for the others pain. It started out with ...

Wow! Before listening to your recording, I really didn't have any great expectations on what it would be like, because you said it wasn't good sound quality. Well, let me ...

I like the idea of this poem, but it was a bit hard to follow, not knowing who was speaking when. I Love these two lines, because when my siblings ...

This one made me chuckle :) My comments are in red Talking to felt so right. Topic after topic into the night. Going on drives, watching a flick, I could ...

Ok, here's my train of thought while reading this.... (in red :)) You died on me tonight, ON me? not sure if I want to read on, but can't help ...

Laugh at me if you want to Hide from me if you can Let me sink into you Like quick sand Chase me if you believe Stay here if you ...

This one made me giggle to myself, Soon unanchored by physics-intrigued child I always see those stray balloons in the ceilings of stores that little kids have let go of ...

This was enticing to read and it is definitely a great work in progress. First, I have to say that it felt like you focused on the blood for the ...