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hiya, I do agree with silentwords , the poem has enough strength to bring out the emphasis in the words. Other than that, I think it was a lovely poem ...

hiya, I really liked it, but had to read it through a few times before i could get the message. The style of writing is really beutiful and i loved ...

heyy, even though it was dark (like everyone had pointed out), I thought it had a lot of depth. And I think that's one thing we writers always are striving ...

hiya, I found it really easygoing and calm. It flowed very nicely and had a very sweet ending.I really liked it very much, one to be reading in the spring ...

wow. It really felt like i was there watching this! I loved the way you wrote that, really pulling me into the story. I really liked your descriptions creating the ...

hiya, I really liked it, but was a bit confused further into the poem because it changed it's style and rhythm as it progresses. I think it needs a bit ...

wow, I really liked it even though it was short and I like your style of writing. Although i wouldn't say it was needed to say "Upwards" because it already ...

hiya, I think it was a really good poem. I like the way it flows, and the topic you chose was one that not many people have the strength to ...

I really liked it, but the way he/she just gave up puzzles me. If I had been shown a little more about the caracter i guess it would have been ...

I think it's a really good story begining. I like the way the caracters play out and the opening of the stody. But you could have enthesised the emotions of ...

The begining was fantastic with the description and rhyme flowing together nicely with a very good choice of vocabulary. But in the end, I got a bit confused the way ...

hiya. I really liked it the way it all linked together. Not revealing too much, yet not too little. It makes you wonder what sort of a girl she really ...

Wow, I loved it. The sad thing is is that i can relate to that. I love the way you managed to put the poem into a story explaining the ...

Wow. I think it's a really beautiful story, the way the shortness compliments the personal feelings. It also get's you thinking of your own special ending and 'what would you ...

What a story. I found it very moving, yet puzzling("It hit him with sharp stab"). I like the way it left so many questions in my head, and pulled me ...