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Re: Lullaby
Oooooo I am so glad it worked! Thanks for reading it and leaving this lovely review!
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: Lullaby
Lol, I have never played Bloodborne, nor see how it looks and feels. Just heard the name. Thanks for reviewing
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: Peeking in
I think I know what you mean, but my goal is not to make my poems understandable by all people. My model in poetry has really vague descriptions and it ...
Oct 2, 2020 -
Re: Salvation Blue
Sorry bro but that is not a review, you need to check that switch under the text that says is this a review.
Oct 1, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Heh congrats on gold user. I had no idea there is such a thing as Greek Orthodox. Gotta check this. Fun fact this poem is related to Greece, Athos Mountain, ...
Oct 1, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Yup I am a Orthodox, really proud of it and my parents bringing me up in its spirit. My father is a priest, my mother a religion teacher and out ...
Oct 1, 2020 -
Re: a love letter to october
Welp I cannot understand the image of the full moon in daytime if I don't remember seeing it heh
Sep 30, 2020 -
Re: a love letter to october
Aha so I guessed correctly, adult with childish mind
Sep 30, 2020 -
Re: Scribbles 1
Hi there welcome to YWS, glad to see another poet among us. Thank you for reviewing my work
Sep 28, 2020 -
Re: Scribbles 1
Yea, the whole idea behind these poems is randomness with a hint of poetical expression and imagery. I agree that unpleased may be kinda lacking in beauty, it is too ...
Sep 28, 2020 -
Re: The death of September
Thank you for reviewing
Sep 26, 2020 -
Re: The death of September
Lol I wanted to create a hostile environment
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: Nature Poem
I am too used to capitalize every line, it seems awkward if I don't. I agree with adding some feelings in the poem, without them it's just a mere painting. ...
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: Baba
Damn Vil, how can I be as wholesome as you ?
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Happy
Nah it's chill, you gave me valuable insight
Sep 24, 2020
