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I intended to show the large amount of blood (blood both literally and metaphorical) and explain it as a red blanket which covers and heats everyone, with its cold heat

Ah so there were behind the scenes details i wasn't aware of. Thank you for clarifying ^^

Thanks for your review. I used past tense to show that the grass is no longer there, and I said the cow cries just because I wanted to, no meaning ...

Great tips but I am a poet who hates explaining and loves abstract ideas and imagery. I love putting together random words and to work with them. I love leaving ...

Totally didn't think of it as a riddle but this riddle side is pretty obvious. Nice point, ty

Do you know the way that heat makes stuff look like. The blurred, watery like surface. I tried to show that. And by summer's snow I showed how soft the ...

Ayyyyyy thank you for reading my poem and giving your own interpretation on it. Didn't actually expect anyone to read it rather than understand it. What you said is mostly ...

Awww thanks for the praise, tbh that is my favorite line as well. It was random at first and without the last stanza but I thought it was too simple ...

The capitalisation is intentional. I listened to a song, yes or yes by twice and said hmmmm let me write yes or no and from there on it came by ...

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Glad you liked it

I think it adds to the abstract feeling of dreams

Well it is as you read it, a boot. The first stanza explained it (leather, nails) and in the following stanza I confirmed it was a boot. I wanted to ...

I am also romanian kekw, I don't like the idea of calling them immortal stories just because I can't see them as a story. A fairytale is much more magical ...