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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Seventh Crown V

    Salutations! All right, so I know you asked not to review this if I haven't read the previous parts (which I haven't), but this was published in April. It's almost ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~Q Part Two

    Back again. XD So, I know I could point out characterisation and plot progression at this point, and I might even, but my main goal is still the same as ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~Q Part One

    Salutations, again! I've already explained the way this will work, so I'll just get right to it. I flew and it felt amazing, but it strained me , though . ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 13.2

    Salutations, Wolfe! I should warn you: this will not be the normal, overly technical and detailed reviews that I usually give. Those take far too long to write, and I'm ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: 10. Defense and Old Friendships

    Salutations! In contrast with my regular, perhaps too detailed reviews, this one will be what I'm calling a "spot-check" - that means instead of focusing on your story, I'll pay ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hunt: Chapter 6; Why can't supernatural beings come at a more convenient time?

    Salutations! I guess I'll be explaining this the whole day long, but this is a spot-check review, which means your story will be ignored while the aspects of your writing ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: .

    Salutations! For today, I've decided to tackle all novel chapters I review in the format of a spot-check, so while I shall read the entire work, I shall only be ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~P Part Two

    Salutations! There are a great many novel chapters in the Green Room at the moment, and since I don't have time to catch up on each story before I review ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.12)

    Not only is this the last review I must write before I have fully caught up, but it will also be my last review for the last Review Day of ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.11)

    I cannot believe I was so stupid! You warned me at least once about this disease, yet when the relevant moment finally arrived, I forgot. Actually, then I can believe ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.10)

    So, it is past midnight now, but Review Day will not be over until two here. This is the third to last chapter, so I shall be done very soon. ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.09)

    Dramatic, wow. Let's get to the review straight away. Notes 1. This chapter is somewhat confusing. It appears to begin in Willow's point of view, but about three-quarters or so ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.08)

    I thought something was missing! Your previous chapter is missing the day, time, and route at the beginning. No wonder I couldn't remember what it was. Notes 1. In Divinity's ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.07)

    It is shameful that from this point forwards, there has only been one review to a single of your chapters. I promised that I'd review everything before today is over, ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.06)

    Ah, so now we have Everett. I can't remember if he has featured as the focus of a chapter before... I don't think so, but I can't be sure. Notes ...

    Dec 30, 2015


I want to understand you, I study your obscure language.
— Alexander Pushkin