BrumalHunter

Salutations. I apologise for taking so long to read and review this - it has been so long, in fact, that I had to reread Chapter Two just so I ...

Salutations for a last time this Review Day! It is a pity that this is your last chapter in the Green Room, but I am sure that you will go ...

Salutations for a second to last time! I am so glad that I have been granted the privilege to write the second review to most of your chapters, as that ...

Salutations for a third to last time! This chapter is much shorter than the previous one, and although short chapters annoy me greatly when I encounter them in a novel, ...

Salutations, once again. I apologise for not reviewing your previous chapter, but someone had beaten me to it. Instead of reviewing a chapter which had already been reviewed twice, I ...

Greetings, once again! Oh my goodness! While I was scrolling down to reach this comment-box, one aspect of your writing struck me immediately: you wrote a massive amount of dialogue. ...

Salutations. (I shall be saying this in the greeting with every one of my reviews, so whether it becomes tedious or not, it will remain.) So, it seems that this ...

I am back! (Salutations, again.) Alright, forget introductions, I have done that already. *has at the work* I don’t go to sleep. As first sentences for a chapter go, this ...

Salutations. Ooh, o.O - a mystery novel! I haven't reviewed one of these for some time, so this ought to be interesting. Before I start, let me say this: Happy ...

Salutations, once again. I see that my assumption was indeed correct when I had guessed that Daniel would be Beth's "White Knight in Shining Armour". However, that means that your ...

Salutations. A Happy Review Day to you! Why is it happy? Because after this, your work will no longer be in the Green Room! This is a really dramatic piece ...

Salutations. Happy - or should I say horrific (excuse my puns ;) ) - Review Day! A Dragon Knight has come to free your work from the clutches of the ...

Salutations. I see you are a - how does the saying go? - sucker for punishment . Very well, I shall point out any grammatical errors I may encounter, but ...

Salutations A happy Review Day to you! This work was supposed to be reviewed last month already, and the fact that it has survived a review day is shameful. I ...

Salutations x3 The more I read, the more your writing seems to improve, so that is most definitely a deserved well-done. And suprisingly, the few mistakes I did notice this ...