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Re: Enoch
Salutations! You know, for a prompt about something you could find in a dumpster, this is certainly one of the more creative and genuinely unexpected responses anyone could have gotten. ...
Sep 23, 2018 -
Re: This could be Heaven
Salutations! This is a pretty poem. It's simple, yet still conveys the general mood and imagery well enough. When I first began reading, I thought it was going to be ...
Sep 22, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 4
Salutations, Buggie! I have returned for yet another review. You know, Fox and I talked yesterday, and during the conversation, your novel came up. We both disputed your claims of ...
Sep 21, 2018 -
Re: Smile i loved
Salutations! Your poem was okay! It was nice to read, but I think there's much you can do to unearth all the potential still hidden away within this. I review ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Daylight Companion
Salutations! You said you had written this poem a while ago and thought you'd share it; well, thanks for that! I enjoyed it, as it was simple and thought-provoking. I've ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: Very invisible before the dream
Salutations! Your username is starting to become familiar to me. It's good that you keep yourself active and write a lot! I hope the reviews you've received on your works ...
Sep 18, 2018 -
Re: Neglected by Nature
Salutations! Considering that this is an essay consisting mostly of hypotheticals and suppositions, there really isn't much I can "review" in terms of content. Oh, I guess there's the typo ...
Sep 17, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 3
Salutations, Buggie! This is easily one of your best chapters in any of your works. The presentation and timing is unexpected, but in the same breath, it's ingenious . While ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 3
SalutaRRRGH! DX I see you received only two reviews on this, and they were from both Buggie and EnderFlash. I was part of that LMS support group! I should have ...
Sep 15, 2018 -
Re: Grown up
Salutations! I commend you for the clarity with which you presented the theme of this poem. The title is fitting, and so too is the rich imagery. Loss of innocence ...
Sep 14, 2018 -
Re: Rejected
Salutations! I'm a sucker for fantasy fiction, and I admit, as soon as I saw "shifter", I was interested. Now, when I review something like short stories, I usually read ...
Sep 13, 2018 -
Re: Queen of Death
Salutations! Hmm, this poem was shorter than expected. I like what you tried to do with the rhyme, but overall, this is too... err, bland. Naturally, I can't just make ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: and i jumped
Salutations! This is a sombre but beautiful poem. At first, I merely thought it was free rhyme, and so it was, but that changed later on (I'll come back to ...
Sep 11, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 2
Salutations, Buggie! I'm certain I'll enjoy reading this chapter as much as the first one, so I can't wait to start! I'm curious to see what Ellipse did to become ...
Sep 10, 2018 -
Re: Solitary Confinement.
Salutations! This is an interesting topic for a short story, and one that lends itself to the genre quite nicely! It's good that you mentioned this was a creative assignment ...
Sep 9, 2018
