BrokenSkye

Thanks! I will change that right now, I don't see how I missed that error!

Thank you both for the comments, I was nerves about posting this because most stories I see never got reviewed. So this means a lot that you would take the ...

This wasn't my first poem. This was just simply the first poem that I've written that rhymes. Sorry for the confusion. But yes, I did notice that my poem really ...

I really liked this! I couldn't find anything wrong with it! But i wasn't sure what the beat was so in my head i was guessing that it was somewhere ...

StoryWeaver, I do believe that my type of love within this poem WAS very typical. Also that I didn't really take the time to review it and edit it completely ...

I think that the poem was lovely and I loved how flexible it was! But now I'm a little curious on what you were talking about, an old blanket or ...

This is an amazing poem. I simply love it. Over all great job.

Emotions and words strug together is a poem. And I have read many many poetry books. I love poetry it is my life. And this is one of my first ...

Thank you every one. I wasn't fully finished with it when I posted. But I thought that I had worked out most of the bugs.

I am mad at you Rain! But thanks for the comment!

I liked it very much Rain. But who left her alone?

Thank you all for the comments. I fixed my errors, and thanks for pointing them out for me I guess that I didn't catch them when I ran over it ...

Awwwww my sister!