BrittanyNicole

Hey! This is interesting. Like, my family eats at MD's alot because its cheap, you know? But it's obviously very unhealthy. I like how you pointed that out. I like ...

Hey! I just wanted to tell you how much I love this: ( A soft sigh escaped pale, pink parted lips as a young girl no more than 16 sat ...

Hey, I really like your poem! It's fantastic. Pompadour is absolutely right. It's short, but it gets your attention right away, with only a few words. but I figured all ...

Hey, I like this. the poem is nice, and makes sense too me until this part; " But yet you still don’t see, not will you ever see." > It ...

Hey, nice to meet you & review your work! >> "I never meant to start the war Never meant for it to go so far Because honestly, I just wanted ...

This is a fantastic poem! I absolutely loved it. I'm a Christian myself, so this really speaks to me. God can be a little scary, I mean, this guy died ...

Honestly, I don't see anything wrong, or doesn't fit this piece. It's really, really, really good. It combines two of my favorite things; Coffee & Love. Things that can break ...

This stories sad & good. Good details & emotion. Claire and I had been best friends since we started grade school. She was the only person I trusted with my ...

Hey, Nice poem/lyric. I like this part; But did you see me as I am? I can't believe we reached the end, oh can you feel it? These memories in ...

Nice poem! I like how it really fits with the world and how life stops for no one. Theres no control with time If you want time Value it It's ...

I really like this poem. It's simple, but has alot of meaning behind it. Encased by extraordinary episodes like fairy-land’s fantastical fiction < I like the fairy-land's part in the ...

Morbid, but nice setting and details. The sniper let out a frustrated breath as he powered down his rifle, both enemies still locked dead in his scope. Still breathing. Still ...

This was a long, well thought out piece of work. Fantastic details. It seems like you thought through this really well. In the education system, they cover mathematics, physics, and ...

I love it, love it, love it. It is dark, but it has real truth in it too. Not many people can put death so completely in a story/poem. But ...

I love this poem also, because i'm a Christian and it speaks really loudly to me. Seeing the bright autumn leaves, Swinging through the summer trees. Thank God for today, ...