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Re: The Life Of a Raindrop
Ok this is good. I love the way you described the raindrop. Your poem has feeling which is good. I agree with the others as well. But over all this ...
Jun 15, 2013 -
Re: The worst day of my life.
ok thanks:)
Apr 23, 2013 -
Re: The worst day of my life.
ok thanks and yes it was a very bad day
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: The worst day of my life.
He was and I miss him so much
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: The worst day of my life.
Its the worst day because MY UNCLE DIED!
Apr 13, 2013 -
Re: The worst day of my life.
Ok thanks but I am new here and I don't know how to edit it:/
Apr 13, 2013 -
Re: Happiness
This is a really good poem. Its kind of sad. The part I really loved was the second and last stanza. So good job on this poem.
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Hurt by my people
This is a good poem.
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Roses and Lillies
This poem is so sweet I luv it.
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: The Savages
this is a cool story.
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: About
I like this poem:) You did well:)
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Me: The Beginning
I love this story it has to be my fav so far:) Thanks for lettin me read it:)
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: A poem from my heart
Good Poem.
Mar 30, 2013