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Re: Trailer Trash
Hey Boo here! In the land of white trash, there was a boy who gave a crap. His name was Mark E. Nash, and he just wouldn't shut his trap. ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: BloodLust
Hey! I'm here to review! It drips down walls and Covers the floors and Spreads the scent of Coppery rust. It fills our eyes with Truth and lies, makes Everything ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Suicide
Hey! So I know you have lots of reviews I only have one grammatical error I had travelled all the way across the city and decided to go home the ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Falling Like Rain
Dig it! It was sweet and had a good rhythm but not to much going on! Really nicely done! Good job! She's lying so still As if sleeping at will ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Who Ate
Every time his parents fought, he ate more than he ought. Ought doesn't sound right. For his emotions he was not ready, so in gym he got too sweaty. Honestly, ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Stuck
Here I am in the middle of a futile attempt to write something beautiful to place my pencil on paper and put images and emotions to words But in reality ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Waiting On a Moment
Why count the hours, the minutes? Moments, (Sometimes blurry, Sometimes pure) Consume your life at most. Time is merely a number Ticking away from grasp; The moments last. That is ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not The Hero
I'm not the one who wears a cape Or saves people I'm not the one who has big muscles Or charming good looks I'm not the one who wants revenge ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: peace
Peace in this world, Hearts full of love, Is what i I wish to see. This world of hate, Of war and fate, Is not supposed to be. If i ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: My Heart does not have Immortality
Hey cutie =p! Okay I don't know if you wanted a real review or just small review. So I decided I'll give you a review as if you weren't my ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
I looked into the Silver Lake and my soul was layed before me. For the lake was but a mirror, of what layed inside one's self. What I saw was ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Life
Boo here! You win some, You lose some, Don't take it to heart, Its just the start, Life is tough, Worse than a cough, Not at all easy, Might make ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: A Gaged Love
Boo here! Her name is gage right? You spell it in 4 lines at a piont.. Gaged Love So many different choices, so many ways to walk. I’m in this ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Empty
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! Melancholy has come to visit today and there is not much I can do or say to make it go away There's a place to ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
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Summer night were always muggy and hot. I never quite get enough to drink and along with my sister, found myself sitting on the front porch step. This sentence doesn't ...
Jun 27, 2011
