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Re: Why I Am Not Beautiful
Hey there :) I really liked this poem. I liked the length of your whole piece, the amount of lines you decided to make each stanza and then how long ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Embrace
Wow. I really really liked this poem. You don't often find positive poems in my opinion these days, especially poems written concerning topics of love and other such things so ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: Flawed Child
Hello there :) Despite the fact that this poem is quite sad and deals with a topic under much criticism and conflict-inducing discussion, I thought that it was very good. ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Scores of the Glass
Hi there :) I personally really really liked this poem. Although it's not a simple read, since you have to think and dissect each line as you're reading it, the ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: The Town of Whill
This has got to be one of the singularly most profound and saddening piece I have ever reviewed thus far on YWS. You write really well, but I will have ...
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Discovering Ian
Well done on writing something that was somehow entertaining and managed to have a decent moral/lesson attached to it. Your writing is interesting in that it introduced the concept of ...
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Insomnia
Hello there. :) I read through the poem you based this short story on before reading through your work and I have to say that your literary work seems to ...
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Broken Smiles
Hey there :) This poem is quite sad, but at the same time I feel that you've managed to tap into an emotion everyone can relate to in a way ...
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 11.2
Hello there. This story sounds really interesting so far. I really like the way you describe things, and your writing has a sort of smooth, effective flow to it which ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: War of the Angels Chapter One
This sounds really good so far, very interesting story line that almost has a slight dystopian and sci-fi twist to it. I like the way you've described your characters and ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Dystopian Prince - Chapter 1
This is really good from what I've read from it. I like the way it grabs my attention with the interesting events. Although it's very intriguing, I think perhaps you ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: The Forever Lake
This is a really really cute poem! I like the length of the lines you've chosen as well as the amount of lines you have decided to put into the ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: The Rest of My Days
Personally, I found this poem exceptionally admirable. I for one am not a big poetry fan, but this one is written simply enough that I don't feel as if I ...
Mar 26, 2015
