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BooksAndDaisyChains

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Why I Am Not Beautiful

    Hey there :) I really liked this poem. I liked the length of your whole piece, the amount of lines you decided to make each stanza and then how long ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Embrace

    Wow. I really really liked this poem. You don't often find positive poems in my opinion these days, especially poems written concerning topics of love and other such things so ...

    May 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Flawed Child

    Hello there :) Despite the fact that this poem is quite sad and deals with a topic under much criticism and conflict-inducing discussion, I thought that it was very good. ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Scores of the Glass

    Hi there :) I personally really really liked this poem. Although it's not a simple read, since you have to think and dissect each line as you're reading it, the ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Town of Whill

    This has got to be one of the singularly most profound and saddening piece I have ever reviewed thus far on YWS. You write really well, but I will have ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Discovering Ian

    Well done on writing something that was somehow entertaining and managed to have a decent moral/lesson attached to it. Your writing is interesting in that it introduced the concept of ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Insomnia

    Hello there. :) I read through the poem you based this short story on before reading through your work and I have to say that your literary work seems to ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Broken Smiles

    Hey there :) This poem is quite sad, but at the same time I feel that you've managed to tap into an emotion everyone can relate to in a way ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Culture Re: Eyes Wide Shut 11.2

    Hello there. This story sounds really interesting so far. I really like the way you describe things, and your writing has a sort of smooth, effective flow to it which ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: War of the Angels Chapter One

    This sounds really good so far, very interesting story line that almost has a slight dystopian and sci-fi twist to it. I like the way you've described your characters and ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dystopian Prince - Chapter 1

    This is really good from what I've read from it. I like the way it grabs my attention with the interesting events. Although it's very intriguing, I think perhaps you ...

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: The Forever Lake

    This is a really really cute poem! I like the length of the lines you've chosen as well as the amount of lines you have decided to put into the ...

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Rest of My Days

    Personally, I found this poem exceptionally admirable. I for one am not a big poetry fan, but this one is written simply enough that I don't feel as if I ...

    Mar 26, 2015


Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.
— George Orwell, 1984