BookWolf

Hello, hello!! So sorry this took me like a week to get to; I haven't been as active lately. But I'm here now and I'm ready to give you a ...

Hey, TribeofArt! :D I saw that you were new so I decided to give your prologue a review to better introduce you into this community and to also give you ...

Hey, Alice! :D Figured I'd give this a short a review. First off I want to say that I really, really liked the beginning. It drew me in immediately and ...

Hello, Snazzy! :D Here for another review. Yes, finally some answers! ;) This really helped clear up the confusion and needing to know more. Don't worry about about this being ...

Hello, Alice! :D I have a review for you. Firstly, I want to tell you my thoughts immediately after reading the chapter: It was good. Already I feel like you've ...

Hello! :D BookWolf here to review your story. Before I begin I just want to say that everything in here is purely my opinion and nothing I say is meant ...

Hey, Snazzy! :D Here for a review. Okay, so, I really liked this chapter, but I'm one of those weird people who love reading travel in books. :P Sometimes, though, ...

Salutations, ehobby1465! :D Sorry this took FOREVER, but I'm here now and ready to review. I'm sure you're probably tired of hearing this and just want to me to get ...

YES! We're going somewhere. :D Honestly, it was getting kind of boring down there, but now we're on the road. And with HOVERBOARDS! This is going to be fun. xD ...

Hello, Mad! :D Beautiful chapter you have here, I really loved the way you ended it. I couldn't really find anything to critique or that needs serious changing, but I ...

Hello, Snazzy! :D I think I might be able to write an actual review this time! Surprising, I know. Here are some nitpicks first, though: "I told him, leaning against ...

Hey, ehobby1465! :D Took me forever to get to this it feels like, but here I am. I think this was my favorite chapter so far. I could feel the ...

Greetings, ehobby1465! :D Here for another review. I'm really loving how this is moving along. You have everything so perfectly planned out and everything so carefully crafted, it's hard for ...

Hello, ehobby1465! :D Here for another review. Although this first chapter wasn't as action-filled as the prologue, I think I liked this better. I'm not sure if this was intentional ...

Wow, this was a very exciting prologue. :D It immediately drew me in, but before I go on with the review, I'd like to welcome you to YWS! If you ...