Boni_Bee

Thanks, Bluecows :) I'm glad you like it. Anyone else want to comment?

lol, I don't know if I get it, but its funny :P

Thanks, Carmina and Ieatworms!!! :D I really apreciate it. Yeah, I realise I need more detail on the Victorian side of it, and I'll fix that up as soon as ...

Nice poem. I liked this, although you sort of repeated yourself a bit, not with the same words, just the same meaning. Yeah, like Niteowl said, there are some line ...

Ok, I fixed those errors up :) Should this be moved to the Romantic section??? :? I'm not sure... Anyway, more comments would be appreciated, and I'll post the fourth ...

Very nice and simple! I think it could have a few more verses, as it sort of ends abruptly, but very good job :)

interesting poem...although it was bit confusing how it changed characters all the time. After the mother was pleading his innocence, it was a bit of a shock to see what ...

^ditto :)

funny!!! fast, quirky, and interesting...

I think this poem was great! It actually made me smile (not at you,), but I like how some of it was ryming, and the rest was more serious. Although ...

Nice poem!!! It has a sweet, lazy tone, with a bit of emotion, but not enough to get excited. Good job

Yeah, I didn't really get this, but it was good. The first stanza didn't ryme as well, and some of the stanza's were a bit off...but quite good.

Thanks, Nefer :D I'll fix those up as soon as I can. I appreciate the critques, because now I know what to work on next time.

Thanks!!! :D I'm going to write a prologue, so you'll all stop asking why Thomas Witting is acting that way! :)

Thanks, SilverGlitter and Snoink!!! :D That was helpful, and I'll edit the story now...but one thing...I like to put spoken sentences on another line, because you can dicern conversations a ...