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Re: ~Remorse~ Summer Camp: Age 15: Brooke
I'm getting sick of your writing already Jas xD This chapter I couldn't really find much to comment on, it was pretty darn good. The only thing is that you ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: ~Remorse~ Chapter One: Marianne
Hi, Hope here to review your old old junk. Blah. I faked a sombre look. Of course I did! Doesn't mean Ms. Queen Bee has to know she can find ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: ~Remorse~ Prologue: Brooke
Blah, I feel so wrong digging up all these old topics so after I finish this stupid dare I'm going to have to review like a million new works just ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~
You wake up one morning and instead of seeing your mom setting eggs and bacon on the red kitchen table, you find you're father sitting down with an alarmed look ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Converse, Paper Airplanes & Dancing in the Rain (Chapter 2)
You and your freaking long chapter, you suck, lets review. Two weeks later, Chloe lay back in her too short bed, her head banging on the headboard, her feet sliding ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Converse, Paper Airplanes & Dancing in the Rain ~Nano 2010~
WOOO LETS GET READY TO RUUUUUMBLE. It was a dark and stormy night, the wind blowing hard and fierce, the trees whistling angrily and Chloe Vasquez was sitting at the ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Medieval Nasal Noises [+ Reading]
Heheheh Kyll that was fantastic, and the fact that you put it in dramatic poetry make me love you even more. The one thing is that I really didn't know ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Hate the Lovely
SO dare accepted and if I finish it there had better be like a freaking Hope shrine at the end of it xD Lets do this yo! His smile is ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: L'Hiver Approche (1/3)
Jaggs can you just stop being so darn good already? Kthxbai. Mkay so you really have great imagery, and description that creates a really fantastic picture in my head. Which ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Shower Poetry
Lillllay! Hai so we be shurin ideaz, so I figured I should review your shtuffs! SO LETS DO THIS YO. I'm counting down the best years of my life with ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Hey DeadEnds!I'm Hope, and I'll be reviewing you today! :D We were just getting out of the depression, getting back onto our feet and finding our place once again in ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Disasterpiece
Hey Seph! So as a painter myself I was really drawn to reading this, and there were somethings I liked, and some things I really didn't. Let's get started with ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Someday Pt 3
It felt like I slept forever. When I woke up I was sure I had slept through my alarm clock. I forced my eyes open and went to the left ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Lost&Found: Chapter 15: Camoflage
So hai Dix, I'm here to review this thing like I said I would, because it looks extremely sad and lonely. So yeah I haven't read any of this before ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Last Hope ch4-5
Mkay I'm going to do this review in two parts to go with the two chapters. Lets get started! :D I haven't read any of this before so forgive me ...
Jan 30, 2011