BondGirl007

Well Valentine, it's been pretty thoroughly criticized so I'll just but in my thoughts on this chapter alone, since I still have yet to read the first two. Even though ...

Heya Kanen, since I just read through what you already have I must say that this is a pretty awesome story you have so far. Each chapter kept me entertained, ...

Hey Fire! This is a great beginning I think, there's not much I really can point out, it's pretty sound. I love the way they're teasing each other in the ...

Hey Love! Here to review! Well, you have a good base of a story, but you really have a lot of work to do on it. The three biggest things ...

Wow, this is really great. I absolutely loved it, you've got a creative way of showing the reader things, and it's beautiful. I was as Ranger was, confused by the ...

Hey Merlin! Hehe This poem made me smile, it's very cute. The subject is very original, so yay for that! But let me just remind you, not all poetry has ...

Hey Nati, Bondgirl here to add another review for your lovely poem! You've got pretty awesome visuals, and I love that it reminded me of a lot of the same ...

'Ello Wiggy my dear! Review time! :D I like this poem, it's got a great feel to it, and I enjoy it, you portray the message very well. Now I ...

Heya Benny Boy! :D This is actually pretty good for only your third poem. However, and this might be just me being a thick headed idiot, but I couldn't really ...

Hey Biffle! I was actually quite interested in this story. I felt it was rather choppy, but maybe that's the way it was meant to be? Also I really didn't ...

Chaz... that made no sense what so ever to me. XD It all seemed really random, and out there, and you lost me so many times while I was reading ...

Hey El! So first off, I really liked this story, it has a few things that need to be fixed, but I think the plot's really good. The beginning I ...

Hey Fire :D lets get started! Here- of the hills lit the midnight sky. Contrasting with the dark sky You repeat sky twice here, and it doesn't really works, so ...

Alright Jasmine, you request, I fulfill. Well it's pretty much been nitpicked thoroughly, so I'll just add my thoughts. It's actually pretty good, for it being written randomly, and I ...

They met at a ball She wore a white dress They chatted like old friends She fiddled with her hair, every tress Yech, I'm sorry but this rhyme is horrible. ...