BondGirl007

Well there's not much to go on, seeing as it's so short, but it seems interesting enough. I can't really tell how good it will be, or if it will ...

Well first off, I hope this isn't based off of you, or someone you know, self harming is dangerous, and can do serious damage to you. I clean my hand ...

Wow Jane, this is great I must say. I'm a Pennsylvania girl, and for a long time my mom's talked about moving to North Carolina. I can related to the ...

Hi there Smashles! So most of this story is sort of obviously very teenage girl romance-y, which is okay, but in some parts you used things that were so cliche ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Bondgirl, or Hope as many call me, and I'm here to review! :D I was blinded by her beauty, not being able to see ...

Hey Baby! I'm Hope and I'll be reviewing your story today! It was my first assignment on the job of journalism. This sentence is rather awkward, and as the first ...

Haha, this makes me laugh, without the little bit in the beginning I would never have know this was writing about a leaf! It sound like you're writing about a ...

I have to agree with Elinor, this left me quite confused, and I'm not quite sure what to make of it. I can't quite get what the meaning of it ...

Hey Eva! The repetition of "Kill me slowly" you overused. There's a fine line of repetition and overuse, and you have to be careful about it because if you do ...

Hey Kat! Well I haven't read the first part yet, so I'll just review this as something on it's own. Well first off, I think you should slow down a ...

Yes! Ellie Yes! This is so much better then before! You did a great job editing it, and instead of sounding like a cheesy teen romance it's great now! I ...

Hey there Ember! Well first off I'm confused, is this your script, or something you acted in? It's a very good script, but a few minor things that needs fixing. ...

Hey Howler! This reminded me very much of Roald Dahl's writing style, and had a sort of same strange characters and interesting end. It's not exactly what I love to ...

Hey Skittle! Hope here to review! Where I am standing, The ground is tainted. Tainted with the blood of the innocent. Don't use that there, it's unnecessary and just takes ...

Ellie look who's gotten into writing poetry all of a sudden :D! Well the title drew me in, I'm a huge Shakespeare girl. I've acted in a bunch of plays, ...