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Wait a minute how come there's no title? Whatever I'll just review this story like normal What I liked: The descriptions made everything appear very vividly in my head. Also ...

Well...I might need to take a shower because I feel dirty now. This is a pretty good set up you have, making lance seem like a nice guy subverting the ...

This entire chapter seems pretty neat. Has some grammar errors but I don't really care about them because not only do I have really bad grammatical errors, but I believe ...

This is pretty darn neat if I do say so myself, which I do. Let's dive into this work of art shall we. What's that? You don't know who I ...

Well this is...interesting. This isn't particularly bad mind you it's just weird. Let me explain, this story starts off with a young kid named joy talking about going to some ...

Oh my a science fiction story! This isn't very common, at least not to me. Anyway I guess I'll start reviewing. I guess I'll tell you about what I didn't ...

Wow. This story has me pretty astounded. You put so much depth and character development in this story which I can tell even though I've never read any of your ...

Wow. Never in my life did I think that I would hear "little goth chicken" on this website. Well, I suppose there's a time and a place for everything. Sorry ...

Let's see this story can only be described in one word: Wholesome. I like how you start off with everything looking all nice and clean. But overtime you start revealing ...

(for the joke review I just immediately joke review: Hera as In the the god?! This was supposed to be based off DnD not Percy Jackson. I must say I ...

joke review: Dear Fantasy writer 76 you are under arrest....for stealing my heart. you just had to make a well crafted story with amazing characters. Not to mention you've left ...

Well this kind of writing er...typing is something not seen a lot on this site. {then again what do I know I haven't been on this site in what five ...

Wow. your short story just opened a whole new world to me all the time there are people at my school who act like the way you described. They never ...

wow. Just wow. this poem is so well made. you sound like you actually were with newt at the time. Wow just wow. This poem has heart and dedication and ...

This entire first chapter seems like a river of flowing crystal clear that I mean It's pretty cool. Nothing amazing or godlike just simple world and character building. You perfectly ...