wow. Just wow. this poem is so well made. you sound like you actually were with newt at the time. Wow just wow. This poem has heart and dedication and bloodshed into it you used some pretty good adjectives, references, and you used a lot of heart. I already mentioned this in the begin in general but I feel the need to say it once again: you sound like you were actually with newt when you read this. I enjoyed quite a bit with this story from the formatting to the lyrics which are absolutely stunning. And to put everything in conclusion, this story can be mostly described like an average relationship. Sure, In the beginning it had some problems a few times it just dragged on a bit too long but you were generally sad when it was over. And for that I rate you four and a half newts out of fiv newts.
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Reviews: 37
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