Bluecat

Your help is very much appreciated!

Thank you for your suggestions!

Another fantasy short-story. If anyone has any ideas for the title or any other names for the settings and characters, feel free to say them. I will most likely do ...

Very creative!

Very realistic. Great job!

I haven't seen many poems like this. This poem is dark and easy to comprehend, while at the same time not being over-dramatic. Well done!

Thank you so much! I will definitely write more

Thank you very much for your compliments!

Sorry, I didn't realize the character was based off a mentally unstable person. It makes more sense now, also after reading the other comments. Is this the reason you didn't ...

This is very helpful! Thank you for your long review. I will definitely add on to this because of your suggestions.

Thank you so much for your review! This was very helpful and I will take your advice.

I had wrote this a while ago, so I decided to take it from Google Docs and paste it here. I made a few edits, but wanted to see what ...

Thank you very much for your compliments. I was hoping someone would feel like they were in the setting. I will definitely try to write more poetry!

I've been to NYC a few times, mostly for cultural experiences. Being on the younger side, I am still pretty idyllic in my thoughts, but aware of the "bad" that ...

I don't usually write poetry, but I figure I would try it. I love going to New York City, because so many things happen. Let me know what you think!