BlueSunset

As a matter of fact, I read the first one, Into The Wild, and it was good. But if you keep practicing, I bet yours might get better than his. ...

I'll think about it. =D

I'm also going to like it!

Sorry, I rewrote the review and made it longer.

Oh, okay. No problem!

I really didn't know those errors until you found them... Thanks for the review!! :D

Thanks a lot! I am going to work on the next chapter! :)

It is AWESOME! I really like how every single line rhymes, and how some parts repeat. It's just so BEAUTIFUL!!!!

I like how some parts rhyme, then others don't. The topic of your poem is good, too. But if you did want to improve on it, I suggest you make ...

Thx for the review. I really think that that information is going to help me! I might change my title to that, maybe another one. Thanks again!!

I really like how it rhymes. It's pretty fascinating when one word can be a whole poem. Though its a poem and it rhymes, it doesn't need to, but of ...

This poem really made me feel emotional! Great, I love it!

It could use a bit less sentences, like adding commas instead of periods. But overal, I personally think its great! I also really like how you describe what she is ...