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BlueSunset

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Our World

    This was so sweet! Kind of reminded me of the Polar Express movie (if you have watched it?) towards the end.

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: walking on water

    thank you so much for the review! this really helped.

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring's Song

    :D

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: Important Parts

    Great! Glad you find them helpful! :D

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thank you for the review. I agree with your points given - this review was helpful!

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    I'm glad you think so!

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thanks a bunch for the review.

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thanks.

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thank you!

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Thanks for your review!

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Ah, thank you!!

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Thank you, thank you, thank you, for this review! It's really going to help me improve and your advice is great. :)

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Interrogation

    No problem! :D

    Feb 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Thank you! Yeah - I randomly wrote down lines in no particular order, but it turned out that way and kind of stuck to how it looked. :P

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Script » Science, General Re: What's the matter?

    This is great.

    Nov 26, 2016


In a world too often governed by corruption and arrogance, it can be difficult to stay true to one's literary and philosophical principles.
— Lemony Snicket